(inspired by the coral reef tank-- our favorite winter hang-out)
salt water ballet
color extrodanary
flows in slow motion
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giggles and bubbles
grubby handprints on the glass
life beneath the sea
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divine artistry
brings forth unfathomable
creativity
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follow me, sissy!
-over, under, through, between-
adventure awaits!
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unchoreographed,
the masses move in perfect
synchronicity
5 comments:
wow, these are really good. i feel like i'm there. thank you so much.
thanks, guys! still don't know about reading...
shaun, why don't you let Lorie and I have a haiku-love match slam between rounds of the jazz slam?
lorie, in this type of format we read back in forth 10 haiku's. higest score wins. maybe 5 rounds would be better.
interesting thought... scarey, but interesting... I could be persuaded, perhaps...
Not to redundantly repeat all the compliments that came before, but these are really great, Lorie. They make me want to go to the zoo.
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