Monday, April 28, 2008

the women's retreat: a haiku

fully clothed, we came
expectant yet uncertain--
longing for your touch

ten in a circle
hearts bared in the dark of night
unzipped and undone

freedom followed tears
joy came with the morning light...
we left, buck-naked

1 comment:

I.I. said...

Come on Lorie, how am I supposed to post a funny little haiku in response to something this touching????? -- Alan M